~AdoQhina~

[zelda]

Name: AdoQhina
Gender: Female
Mate: None
Kin: None
Breed: Eastern Wolf (Canis Lycaon)
Age: 3 (In real time, about 21 in Wolf Years [like dog years, just better ^^])
Looks: (I included her picture just in case) AdoQhina has a long muzzle with mostly grey and white coloring. Her neck is mostly black. Her paws are dark grey and her eyes are brown. The fur on the side of her face is frosted grey, and the tips of her ears are jet black.
Pack/Clan: Ruin Forest Pack/ (Help with clan?)
Rank: Beta Female (I THINK this is available, it said so on the rank list)
Personality: AdoQhina is an aggressive Eastern Wolf. She'll do anything to defend her honor and pack, and is very loyal to her higher ups. She has a bit of sympathy for the younger wolves, yet has no sympathy. She has no interest in mating yet.
History: Ado was raised as a loner, but eventually worked her way into the Ruin Forest Pack. She has no mate or kin, and one deceased brother. The whereabouts of her parents are unknown.

(I think there are a few things I need to edit, so if I can get some help with that, that would be awesome. Tell me what I need to fix, please!)

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[*Glintfur*]

Grammer wise, there are some problems. You said in her looks that she is mostly gray and then you restated it on her neck. Instead you can say that she has a lot of black on her neck.

I fixed some spelling issues for you Zelda:

Name: AdoQhina
Gender: Female
Mate: None
Kin: None
Breed: Eastern Wolf (Canis Lycaon)
Age: 3 (In real time, about 21 in Wolf Years [like dog years, just better ^^])
Looks: (I included her picture just in case) AdoQhina has a long muzzle with mostly grey and white coloring. Her neck is mostly grey and black. Her paws are dark grey and her eyes are brown. The fur on the side of her face is frosted grey, and the tips of her ears are jet black.
Pack/Clan: Ruin Forest Pack/ (Help with clan?)
Rank: Beta Female (I THINK this is available, it said so on the rank list)
Personality: AdoQhina is an aggressive Eastern Wolf. She'll do anything to defend her honor and pack, and is very loyal to her higher ups. She has a bit of sympathy for the younger wolves, yet has no sympathy. She has no interest in mating yet.
History: Ado was raised as a loner, but eventually worked her way into the Ruin Forest Pack. She has no mate or kin, and one deceased brother. The whereabouts of her parents are unknown.

(I think there are a few things I need to edit, so if I can get some help with that, that would be awesome. Tell me what I need to fix, please!)


Everything else is great! You are allowed to have the Beta Female rank as well for you are right, there is none. Just understand that V2 is coming soon so if you want your characters bloodline to continue ask for a mate and your pups will be delivered soon. In V2 the pups will be adults that are just about to turn elders, figuring its 20 years from now. ^^ Lot's of information I know, just giving you the heads up if you don't already know.

Post in this thread and it will be accepted, granted you made the changes.

[zelda]

^^ Sorry, I fail at typing
I'll fix that
Also, I'll only be requesting a mate for Sandalio and AdoQhina then. I won't continue Faioliama's bloodline. Actaully...
If possible, coul I maybe jsut recreate the characters in the V2? (The gate mysteriously comes to mind.)
If not, I'll request mates.
Thank Yewwww!

[Aryus]

yea, it might be best to wait and play this character in V2 sense V2 is almost ready to open (1-2 months as we wrap up things here.) Sense you already made the bio here, you can just save it here so you dont have to create another bio for the same wolf ^^ (This site will be saved and put on maintenance mode so staff can read old bios) I hope that simplifies things!

Also with the wolves already being played, you will have to ask for mates, the plot on v2 will be places 20 years in the future.

[zelda]

Ok. I'll save this bio so I can recreate AdoQhina and request a mate for Sandalio. Then, it's all just a matter of coming up with a name, and that's hard. Plus, there's the gender and shiz. So we'll see how this comes out.

[*Glintfur*]

No problem.